I have not received word about my car yet, but one of the other field test participants shared the news of their "arrival" message. It is a bit ironic.
See anything wrong here:
This day has arrived and so has your new MINIe!!! Tomorrow our technicians will be scheduling her to have her Pre-delivery inspection.
As soon as they have completed what they need to do, and I've completed everything I need to do, she'll be ready for her:
* First full tank of petrol and;
* Her delivery wash & detail.
I'll be giving you a call in the morning to discuss your delivery appointment.