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I have not received word about my car yet, but one of the other field test participants shared the news of their "arrival" message.  It is a bit ironic.

See anything wrong here:

Subject: Your MINIe has arrived!!!


This day has arrived and so has your new MINIe!!!  Tomorrow our technicians will be scheduling her to have her Pre-delivery inspection.

As soon as they have completed what they need to do, and I've completed everything I need to do, she'll be ready for her:
 * First full tank of petrol and;
 * Her delivery wash & detail.

I'll be giving you a call in the morning to discuss your delivery appointment.